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AllenGlines




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Registration date : 2007-05-02

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PostSubject: #9   #9 Icon_minitimeSun May 06, 2007 5:18 pm

It’s funny how people can talk
When my back is turned away,
But they have nothing to say
When I confront them directly.
What’s to say about these cowards?
I read every word you wrote,
Turning your peons against me,
And making you seem a victim.
I’m not one for childish beef,
But you ignited a fire within
And I’m not about to put it out.
I laugh at your supposed version
Of what you’re calling the truth.
You know me better than most,
So what did you honestly expect?
All I’m asking for is respect.

Go ahead, pound the nails in.
One day you’ll remember
What I said wasn’t an assumption,
But rather nothing but facts.
How come you couldn’t handle
Your past statements coming back
To haunt you like closet skeletons?
I’ll let the world know the truth.
I thought you were my friend.
I laughed at your petty poem.
Where did you get those lies?
Are their condos in your dream world?
I want to purchase a few.
They must be great and blissful
If they inspired what you spew.
I’ll make you regret it all.

Go ahead, start the negotiations
To further the process of peace.
I’ll attend, and sign some papers,
But I’m not going to schedule
Them because you started a war.
Give me the respect I deserve
Before I come take it by force.
Diplomacy is no longer an option,
So I’m preparing an aerial attack.
Go ahead, scrawl a response,
Send blind followers my direction,
And do whatever you need to.
I’ll be waiting brandishing my pen,
Ready to write war rhymes again.
I recant my order of surrender.
Consider this a declaration of war.
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Number of posts : 567
Age : 42
Home : Land of Green & Gold
Humour : Funni crazy kind
Hobbies : writing poetry and laughing
Registration date : 2007-05-01

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PostSubject: Re: #9   #9 Icon_minitimeMon May 07, 2007 2:49 pm

great write up but it was full of such anger in it towards this person u called your fruend, maybe it would just be better to let it go and not to dweel on it to much as in the end all the anger will eat away at you.

i did love the structure of the poem tho great job
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